After
taking feedback and re-watching my last elevator pitch, I thought that I did a
pretty good job overall but there were some things I need to change. I think
that I need to be more exact in the points I am making. I did a little bit of
talking in circles which was not good, and I need to improve on that. In
addition, I think I need to relate to the audience better. However, I do think
that I did a good job with hand motions and speaking clearly and loudly. After
reading the feedback from my peers, I decided to get right to the point and try
to capture the audience and relate to them. Hopefully it is a better pitch and improves
upon the things I did wrong at first.
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